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"Attention is the beginning of devotion — and without devotion there is nothing. Attention without feeling, I began to learn, is only a report."
— Mary Oliver, from the title essay of Upstream, p. 8 highlighted 21 Apr · 09:14
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Teach the children. We don't matter so much, but the children do. Show them daisies and the pale hepatica. Teach them the taste of sassafras and wintergreen. The lives of the blue sailors, mallow, sunbursts, the moccasin flowers. Attention is the beginning of devotion — and without devotion there is nothing. Attention without feeling, I began to learn, is only a report. An openness — an empathy — was necessary if the attention was to matter.

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MA Maya — a private note to yourself 21 Apr · 09:18

"Attention without feeling is only a report." The line I want above the desk. Newport's deep work is the same gesture without the warmth — Oliver gives it back.

MA Maya — a private note 3 May · 22:41

Re-reading at night. Tonight it lands differently — the line is about my mother, not about reading.

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This is the same gesture you marked fourteen months ago in Deep Work — "the ability to focus, without distraction, on a cognitively demanding task" — though Newport frames attention as a skill to be trained and Oliver frames it as a tenderness the world is owed.

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5 connected highlights · drawn by the garden last night
branchattention · deep work 14 mo ago

"The ability to focus, without distraction, on a cognitively demanding task — this is the superpower of the 21st century."

Cal Newport, Deep Work, p. 14
ai Both treat attention as the precondition for any worthwhile work; Newport names it a skill, Oliver names it a feeling.
branchattention · the present moment 8 mo ago

"To pay attention, this is our endless and proper work."

Mary Oliver, Yes! No!, in White Pine
ai The same writer, six years later — the imperative softens but the thesis is identical.
branchcraft · patterns 3 wk ago

"A pattern language is not a recipe. It is a way of paying attention, written down, so that other people can pay attention with it."

Christopher Alexander, A Pattern Language, p. 614
ai Both invoke "paying attention" as a kind of devotion the maker offers the world.
branchmortality · solnit on loss 5 mo ago

"Lost things continue to be ours only if we cease to grieve for them; otherwise they take everything else with them."

Rebecca Solnit, A Field Guide to Getting Lost, p. 22
ai An adjacent insight on what attention costs when it is given to what is no longer there.
branchattention · the present moment 2 y ago

"How we spend our days is, of course, how we spend our lives."

Annie Dillard, The Writing Life, p. 32
ai The Oliver line is the moral; the Dillard line is the consequence.
branchcraft · apprenticeship 11 mo ago

"Show, don't tell. Then show again. Then say it once, slowly."

Frank Chimero, The shape of design, ch. 4
ai A craft argument with the same shape — attention first, then the gesture.